Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Three Thoughts

1.
Sometimes odd couples
are actually even
and my match
does start a fire.

2.
Expectations are a
well in my heart
the further away
the closer to start
I'm drowning in three 
inches of life.

3.
My sadness is hidden
-why I don't know
I started to cry
when I saw it go
I chased it down the street
then I held my head high
in defeat.

32 comments:

  1. u made this?

    its awesome cheers for that!

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  2. Heavy stuff. What do the last two lines in the 2nd one mean?

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  3. Wow I like number 1, it would have been perfect for valentines day!

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  4. some good stuff, number 3 is my fav

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  5. Pretty deep stuff i think i actually like the first one best. :3

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  6. I like second one, keep posting these they're good. Following

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  7. wow, really thoughtful stuff. number 1 is really lovely.

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  8. Really nice, third is my favorite.

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  9. I love that line, "I'm drowning in three
    inches of life."

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  10. This stuff is too deep for me. I'm still in the "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue" phase when it comes to poetry.

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  11. well cant really say i relate to any of those statements :D

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  12. "Expectations are a
    well in my heart
    the further away
    the closer to start
    I'm drowning in three
    inches of life."

    Would make a sick tattoo

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  13. I like the thought of odd couples being even by nature. Good stuff.

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  14. Grand work, if I were you I would try to submit some of these to contests and try to get some published!

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  15. Very pretty, thanks for sharing

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  16. thanks for sharing some lovely words! i agree with the odd couples being an exact match. this is exactly my case right now

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  17. Did you write these yourself? I'm impressed. Number two just speaks volumes.

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  18. Not normally into poetry but these were quite good.

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  19. Nice. Such superb use of imagery in a confined medium. The second one is best.

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  20. I have the same cape as those guys in that video

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  21. Some times odd couples are even yes... but sometimes not. :) Nice blog

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