Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Three Thoughts

1.
Sometimes odd couples
are actually even
and my match
does start a fire.

2.
Expectations are a
well in my heart
the further away
the closer to start
I'm drowning in three 
inches of life.

3.
My sadness is hidden
-why I don't know
I started to cry
when I saw it go
I chased it down the street
then I held my head high
in defeat.

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32 comments:

  1. The Angry LurkerFebruary 16, 2011 at 2:11 PM

    I like 3. the best.

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  2. D.B.February 16, 2011 at 2:37 PM

    u made this?

    its awesome cheers for that!

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  3. SpongeworthyFebruary 16, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    Heavy stuff. What do the last two lines in the 2nd one mean?

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  4. ChefJRHFebruary 16, 2011 at 3:50 PM

    Wow I like number 1, it would have been perfect for valentines day!

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  5. AnonymouseFebruary 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    some good stuff, number 3 is my fav

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  6. SpiderflawFebruary 16, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    Pretty deep stuff i think i actually like the first one best. :3

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  7. Jimmy BeatsFebruary 16, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    I like second one, keep posting these they're good. Following

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  8. Improve your Vocab!February 16, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    wow, really thoughtful stuff. number 1 is really lovely.

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  9. RabidmooseFebruary 16, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    Really nice, third is my favorite.

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  10. Bring_NapkinsFebruary 16, 2011 at 10:28 PM

    I love that line, "I'm drowning in three
    inches of life."

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  11. WobblesFebruary 16, 2011 at 10:28 PM

    This stuff is too deep for me. I'm still in the "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue" phase when it comes to poetry.

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  12. BartFebruary 16, 2011 at 10:58 PM

    well cant really say i relate to any of those statements :D

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  13. LeviuqseFebruary 16, 2011 at 11:55 PM

    you made this??
    im jealous!!

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  14. JcacheFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:21 AM

    "Expectations are a
    well in my heart
    the further away
    the closer to start
    I'm drowning in three
    inches of life."

    Would make a sick tattoo

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  15. JoshFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    I like the thought of odd couples being even by nature. Good stuff.

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  16. Daniel AndradeFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    congratz ;)

    really good stuff!

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  17. Dr.ThraxFebruary 17, 2011 at 4:19 AM

    Grand work, if I were you I would try to submit some of these to contests and try to get some published!

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  18. RaZerFebruary 17, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Very pretty, thanks for sharing

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  19. MikeFebruary 17, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    thanks for sharing some lovely words! i agree with the odd couples being an exact match. this is exactly my case right now

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  20. Daniel AndradeFebruary 17, 2011 at 8:47 PM

    w8ting for more ;)

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  21. VenoFebruary 17, 2011 at 11:31 PM

    Did you write these yourself? I'm impressed. Number two just speaks volumes.

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  22. Come At Me BroFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Nice thoughts!

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  23. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    Liked number 3

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  24. jonwintersFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    i liked #2 the most

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  25. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    Not normally into poetry but these were quite good.

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  26. JimFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:45 PM

    Nice. Such superb use of imagery in a confined medium. The second one is best.

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  27. Red13February 18, 2011 at 9:56 PM

    Like number 2

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  28. MArkFebruary 19, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    number dos is awesome

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  29. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    I have the same cape as those guys in that video

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  30. FilmAdviserFebruary 24, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    Very deep thoughts

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  31. nooneFebruary 24, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    Some times odd couples are even yes... but sometimes not. :) Nice blog

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  32. Jesse BrooksMarch 1, 2011 at 6:43 AM

    I like this one a lot. :)

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