Wednesday, April 6, 2011

A Sight That Can't Been Seen, A Rhapsody

photo credit: http://wondersinthedark.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/31-kiss-me-deadly/


the vast emptiness that has taken up residence in my chest has given me a second chance
i have a type, and it's wielding feelings like slick weaponry
i wanna shoot you down, and drag you back with me
but, will i once again let regret rain down?  dropping bombs that sound of change and send me further out from now
it's just, i know you see past my eyes directly to my brain, the way we look at eachother - it's hard to explain.

we leave verbal words for the rest of our deaf/dumb friends.  we communicate like two book ends, the compliment our relations create make the elements melt away.  it's only us on those days. and when we share those looks i drop straight to a dream.

i'm barefoot in the den and you're in the kitchen and we're sharing laughs that span an entire house we won't ever come out from.  and centuries down the road our blood will still flow in the great make up of the whole damn earth.  and it's something we'll never quite know.

i'm sure that love will take us, at least back to your place, if we ever do get vocal.
i know exactly when we met, how i never saw someone like you, happy as a fool, like me i believed there was distress and restlessness underneath.  i can't wait to let you explode right onto me.

65 comments:

  1. Evocative and heartfelt. Lovely.

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  2. It feels different. I can't put my finger on it. Of course it's still excellently written.

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  3. Excellent writing skills! :D

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  4. Intriguing. You are a very skillful writer. Bravo.

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  5. The stage of Love where the two are divinely comfortable with each other. Here's hoping this is based on current evens Ms. Moran!

    Excellent piece as always!

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  6. Yeah, this one is a small departure from the style of the others, but in a good way. I really like it.

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  7. man that is truly beautiful...
    :'/

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  8. great post thanks for sharing

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  9. combustication is dangerous, good read

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  10. you use words really good like

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  11. Wow. Beautifully written! Clearly straight from the heart. Following :)

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  12. Oh nice. Thnx for the info.

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  13. Very nice! It gets my imagination going.

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  14. nice post!

    http://all-around-toto.blogspot.com

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  15. I share your last sentiments there.

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  16. Great! Wait for more :)

    FOLLOWED

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  17. Sounds like a poem about seeing a true lover after a long time!

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  18. that was really lovely, following

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  19. I like the last line "i can't wait to let you explode right onto me." :D

    Post some more dude, these are nice!

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  20. amazing!

    http://all-around-toto.blogspot.com/

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  21. I have far too many deaf/dumb friends. ha

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  22. Hey. a more positive poem! who knew this would appear someday :P

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  23. Actually came back to read this a second time after thinking about it today. You really are VERY talented at putting your feelings into words!

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  24. 'and centuries down the road our blood will still flow in the great make up of the whole damn earth.'

    LOVE IT!

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  27. Very nice writing, I really enjoyed reading it!

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