we're too proud of our struggles, and useless luggage
and yet we find everything we've been searching for all without trouble
so if it's good to think wisely, how come it doesn't feel fine (it strands you with nothing)
but i've broke through it all, it's just the free fall
you know how we end up? declared demons of our species, the grave robbers, and decadent beauty, all wind up the same, a face in a frame, on a wall in a house
all built with bare hands, the only things that still stand. all our frequent dreams, they conclude - the curtain dropping is what finally stops us
so heavenly father, please, tell me this - should i look down?
because i lost something trying not to get it stolen
i'm about to show all my cards, i'm folding
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If this is honest, don't fold. If it's not, you really sucked me in. Nice job.
ReplyDeletelast line is EPIC. Major props for this powerful work of yours
ReplyDeletethis is great :)
ReplyDeletewas interesting to read as well haha
An especially powerful title for a piece with religious themes.
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ReplyDeletenice ending, love that reference
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ReplyDelete'declared demons of our species'
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i like your posts!!!
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Love the last line ^^
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Very, very cool. Seriously. Nice job!
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