Wednesday, April 13, 2011

I Can Stay At Your Place

i know you see me as my eyes plead with yours to scoop me up and carry me home. is it okay if i call it home now too? they left me out there to die, the knives in so deep they're jabbed in the bone, and i'll take them out when we get back, i just can't do it alone.

the entire ride home we baked in the suspense, refusing to break the damp silence, but i wanted so badly to share it all with you - to tell you everything. i wanted to tell you how i expended all my energy avoiding aged demons that kept me from sleeping, and how all the dodging did me no good cause once i was drained they let themselves in and did a dance on the past couple years, spared me nothing, i got stabbed all the times i had coming. but i knew you wouldn't judge me like the others. you stopped my breakdown, made me turn corners. and i was broken, but you were boring. i was hostile, but you sought more from it.

i'm glad i survived this long, so my enemies couldn't see me die, the last bits of anger dripping out on your floor, at the very beginning when you pulled them out all you could hear was the frustrations pour.

51 comments:

  1. nicely written, intense ending
    i like it :)

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  2. wow...i'm sort of afraid of you now.

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  3. I felt the poem, it was a emotional ride, very well written :)

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  4. always writing great stuff on here, nice work :)

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  5. You can stay so long as you dont get any blood in the back of my car. lol.

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  6. Didn't expect the twist-thing for some reason.. Good stuff, yet again.

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  7. another emotional poem. great job!

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  8. This reminds me 100% of a real event that took place in my own life. I was the scooper and not the scoop-ee though. Very vulnerable and deep piece Megan!

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  9. Really emotional, as others have said

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  10. sounds like being stabbed on a rainy day. scary

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  11. wow.. thats kind of... intense isn't it?

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  12. i am all about expressing emotion at this point. i loved it.

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  13. you are creepy xD in a good way :D

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  14. Reminds me somehow of a song called "Driving with the Brakes On", but this poem is way more intense and visceral.

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  15. okkkk very intense... I wish you the best.

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  16. ;_;

    At least there was someone who tried to be there

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  17. Great blog man i will be following it for sure!!!! maybe you can check out my latest post and comment on it. Maybe even follow?

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  18. Ah! write something lifting! so dreadful and creepy :P good though!

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  19. Very well written. Enjoyed this post.

    Thank you for sharing, and keep writing!

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  20. emotional, motivational, and deep!

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  21. wow you are a very nice writer :D I still love you :D

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  22. our minds certainly coincide to each other :P

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  23. really nice writing! you sure have a talent there. i couldnt stop reading your post. keep it up!

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  25. Great post! Very interesting, I'll be sure to come back! Keep up the great work :)

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  26. yeah that was good writing. i like depressing ;)

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  27. awesome as usual! keep them coming.

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  28. love your blog! keep up the quality posts!

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