i can't believe i still talk about you aloud
like you're still around
the ultimate indicator that i'm completely crazy
my conversations with you are always my favorite
ahh what a world it would be if you were back here with me
now i reside by windows, and i esteem myself low
along with my ambiance
along with my foe
i see a squirrel perched on a dead branch
he's in that early morning promising shade
and i think - this must be more than happenstance
him with his weight upon the dead
where my faith lies, atop what i dread
i trace the letters out with my fingers,
the etchings in the snow meant, i don't know.
stress wasn't secondary, it was tertiary and we didn't care
that same distinct disease still haunts me daily
and there's no remedy
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Very well done, that is really good.
ReplyDeletei am sad now. :(
ReplyDeleteI talk aloud constantly. I believe it HELPS my sanity. It can be helpful for grief too.
ReplyDeleteTake care Meghan.
I hope that squirrel finds a nicer branch.
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I think this is sad too.
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ReplyDeletevery sad and troubled
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ReplyDeletesad poem. :(
ReplyDeleteand i esteem myself low
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Very sad but very well done. Emotion provoking. good job.
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Sad, and beautiful!
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ReplyDeleteI hope the squirrel gets off that dead branch, but then again its enjoying the shade.
very nice, thanks
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Wistfully sad. Very nice work.
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ReplyDeleteI have nothing else to say...
great post!
ReplyDeleteI just realized the most prominent theme in your poems is death, followed by love. I have a feeling you'd like the movie 'requiem for a dream'
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