Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Ain't Nothing Worse Than Nothing

the grudges just kept rubbing at my iridescent heart
eventually letting all the good get pealed away
and all the angry that dispensed was confounded with me - properly on defense
the demons that unleashed reaped havoc not on me,
but every piece where you had custody

so i chanced the mystery that swam with me
i felt it an open opportunity to leave
as i struggled to defend the choices i had taken
my weakened memory forgot how merry things had made a place
they flew off moments after our last

i left that part of you, but it hadn't left a wound
i thought i got away with something: until i realized,
there's nothing worse than Nothing.

59 comments:

  1. nothing is better than nothing then

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  2. your writings are awesome. thanks for sharing

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  3. Great ending - especially having the second 'nothing' the only capitalised word.

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  4. there's nothing worse than Nothin, so true

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  5. awesome stuff :)
    thank you for sharing it :D

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  6. liked it, thanks for sharing.

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  7. I really like this one, it was very deep...

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  8. I really like this one, great job!

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  9. oh no, i feel like nothing after reading this -
    good stuff

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  10. I gave you an internet-five

    :)

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  11. another great post, keep em coming.

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  12. great read. keep up the good work

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  13. I like this a lot. good stuff

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  14. Especially like that ending, one of the better pieces I've read here.

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  15. How about.. nothing? Followed! alphabetalife.blogspot.com

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  16. Truer words have never been spoken.

    P.S. Following ya.

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  17. Beautiful poem. Following this blog.

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  18. Have an iridescent weekend!!! Following.

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  19. nice blog dude! interesting stuff!

    thanks for checking my blog earlier too, ill follow ya :)

    epicmoustacheblog.blogspot.com!

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  20. Great! I love it. And very nice blog.

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  21. nothing worse then Nothing.

    I agree with that very much so!
    You need something for you are Something ;)

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  22. The more I read this, the more I like it.

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  23. awesome poem, I would love to read more! Keep up the good work!

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  24. your blog title says it all. theres nothing worse than to actually have nothing!

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  25. indeed... there is nothing worse than that, man!

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  26. having nothing could make you or brake you

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