Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Ain't Nothing Worse Than Nothing

the grudges just kept rubbing at my iridescent heart
eventually letting all the good get pealed away
and all the angry that dispensed was confounded with me - properly on defense
the demons that unleashed reaped havoc not on me,
but every piece where you had custody

so i chanced the mystery that swam with me
i felt it an open opportunity to leave
as i struggled to defend the choices i had taken
my weakened memory forgot how merry things had made a place
they flew off moments after our last

i left that part of you, but it hadn't left a wound
i thought i got away with something: until i realized,
there's nothing worse than Nothing.
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54 comments:

  1. DranianMarch 9, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    good stuff. thanks.

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  2. nooneMarch 9, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    really nice.

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  3. ChrisMarch 9, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    Excellent material

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  4. ErikaMarch 9, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    Love it =]

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  5. Fix PC Games AdminMarch 9, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    nothing is better than nothing then

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  6. baxxmanMarch 9, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    your writings are awesome. thanks for sharing

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  7. MelanieMarch 9, 2011 at 1:46 PM

    very good stuff!

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  8. AlphabetaMarch 9, 2011 at 1:54 PM

    Great ending - especially having the second 'nothing' the only capitalised word.

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  9. muckyourselfMarch 9, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    there's nothing worse than Nothin, so true

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  10. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    awesome stuff :)
    thank you for sharing it :D

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  11. wMarch 9, 2011 at 3:34 PM

    this is good stuff!

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  12. UnknownMarch 9, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    great one

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  13. JamyMarch 9, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    liked it, thanks for sharing.

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  14. BubiMarch 9, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    awesome,love your writing

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  15. Aaron M. GipsonMarch 9, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    I really like this one, it was very deep...

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  16. ChefJRHMarch 9, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    I enjoyed reading this one.

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  17. UnknownMarch 9, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    A very good read. Keep it up!

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  18. D4March 9, 2011 at 7:07 PM

    deep. nice.

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  19. RawMarch 9, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    I really like this one, great job!

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  20. JayMarch 9, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    that's a bit depressing. :|

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  21. AshMarch 9, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    Awesome stuff!

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  22. edMarch 9, 2011 at 10:33 PM

    oh no, i feel like nothing after reading this -
    good stuff

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  23. tak47March 9, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    I like it, the nothingness.

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  24. skinned sheepMarch 10, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    thats great!

    food for thought

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  25. Forrest StumpMarch 10, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    great job and good stuff

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  26. Stef PelgrimsMarch 10, 2011 at 3:23 AM

    really nice!

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  27. MerlyyMarch 10, 2011 at 6:17 AM

    I gave you an internet-five

    :)

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  28. SpikeMarch 10, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    great read, thanks

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  29. NingenMarch 10, 2011 at 7:26 AM

    goes deep under my bones

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  30. obiMarch 10, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    another great post, keep em coming.

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  31. TheHarvesterMarch 10, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    great read. keep up the good work

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  32. duffboiMarch 10, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    I like this a lot. good stuff

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  33. NikoMarch 10, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Nice!

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  34. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    Liking it. Good stuff.

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  35. DocStoutMarch 10, 2011 at 9:37 PM

    Especially like that ending, one of the better pieces I've read here.

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  36. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    I like this.

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  37. taioMarch 11, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    I like

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  38. AnonymouseMarch 11, 2011 at 1:17 AM

    nice writing. :)

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  39. MerlyyMarch 11, 2011 at 5:39 AM

    Nice, I enjoyed it.

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  40. Jessica ThompsonMarch 11, 2011 at 5:50 AM

    How about.. nothing? Followed! alphabetalife.blogspot.com

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  41. Jimmy FungusMarch 11, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    Truer words have never been spoken.

    P.S. Following ya.

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  42. viljami.korianteriMarch 11, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    very nice!

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  43. Pinecone StewMarch 11, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    Have an iridescent weekend!!! Following.

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  44. DrivebotMarch 12, 2011 at 4:00 AM

    nice blog dude! interesting stuff!

    thanks for checking my blog earlier too, ill follow ya :)

    epicmoustacheblog.blogspot.com!

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  45. Justin testingMarch 12, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Enjoyed this one, keep it up! :3

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  46. T. BanacekMarch 12, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    Great! I love it. And very nice blog.

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  47. DootzkieMarch 12, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    nothing worse then Nothing.

    I agree with that very much so!
    You need something for you are Something ;)

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  48. JungMarch 12, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    Wonderfully written.

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  49. AnonymousMarch 12, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    The more I read this, the more I like it.

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  50. WestusMarch 12, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    awesome poem, I would love to read more! Keep up the good work!

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  51. RabidmooseMarch 12, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Another great one!

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  52. TheHarvesterMarch 13, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    your blog title says it all. theres nothing worse than to actually have nothing!

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  53. TasosMarch 13, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    indeed... there is nothing worse than that, man!

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  54. The Awesome AlienMarch 23, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    having nothing could make you or brake you

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